Friday, June 29, 2012

Prompt #2 Jenny

Prompt: Jenny when shopping and never came back

(I didn't do any revising and spent very little time on this, sorry)

        Jenny awoke from her nap on a sunday afternoon to find herself snuggling with her fiance on there couch. Sunlight shone from the nearby windows illuminating the beige room. A thin light brown blanket draped the couple and the fuzzy couch. The sunlight warmed Jenny and her soulmate making it so comfortable that Jenny didn't want to get up.
        She grabbed the TV remote from the mahogany coffee table that sat in front of the couch and used it to turn on the TV that sat a few feet away from the table. It turned on with a few second of delay. Without hesitation she flipped to the news. A seemingly nervous reporter was advising people to stay inside for some reason that Jenny didn't care to find out. Snuggling with her fiance, Willy, made her appreciate how much he did for her.
        An idea sprung into her head as she gently got of the couch, careful not wake up Willy. She grabbed a pen and paper and wrote a note explaining where she was going and left it on the counter. She slipped out of the door with her wallet, locking it behind her. She pulled her car out of her driveway and took of on her way to the grocery store.
        The idea of making Willy dinner filled her mind with thoughts of how happy and surprised he will be when he wakes up to the smell of eggplant parmesan. Her thoughts soon turned from joy to confusion. The usually busy streets were completely deserted. Jenny ignored it and parked in the empty parking lot of the grocery store.
        The store was eerily deserted.
        "Hello!" Jenny yelled into the silent store.
        "Under here" whispered a creepy voice from the checkout.
        Jenny followed the voice looking for who whispered. No one was in sight.
        "Who's there" said Jenny softer than before.
        "Shut up" whispered the same voice from before, but this time with a sense of panic in his tone.
        "Who are you" whispered Jenny.
        "That's not important, why are you out in the open?"
        "What do you mean"
        "You need to hide, theres a man on the loose"
        "What kind of man?"
        "He takes women and then he-"
        The voice was cut off. Jenny grew more and more scared. She sprinted to the exit and tried to pull open the doors. They were locked.
        All of a sudden Jenny felt heavy breathing on her neck. Jenny slowly turned around and saw something more dangerous to women then she could have ever imagined.
        Looking her in the eye was Chris Brown with the back of his hand raised in the air.

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